Thursday 2nd July-main story and ending :)
Hi all, Well I've read some descriptive introductions to your stories,well done.Your writing drew me in to wanting to read the next part! So today,I would like you to write the next stage of the story.You have introduced it,described the setting and invented 2 new characters. Next can you write the main body of the adventure please and think of an exciting ending.Was it all a dream?!! If you raced ahead and did a bit more can you re-read it and edit it please?See if you can improve your writing by adding more adjectives and adverbs,or injecting more description in to your setting.This part (at the beginning) is really important for inviting the reader to read on.Or not!!! Good luck!